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March 19th, 2018, 9:00 am
Year 1 Chapter 2 Page 1
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kippydraw
March 16th, 2018, 11:22 am
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and just like that, we're on chapter 2!!!! (which is much shorter than chapter one; from now on they'll be between 20-30 pages)

her name will get dropped eventually, but say hey to kea ;>

links: blog | twitter | patreon
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YaoiGirl09
March 19th, 2018, 9:14 am
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Is it just me or is the page missing?
Nimbus45
March 19th, 2018, 9:28 am
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Well i can't read it ://
charlie059977
March 19th, 2018, 10:00 am
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I can't read either there is nothing there....
Moondragon
March 19th, 2018, 10:10 am
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I can't see the update!
YaoiGirl09
March 19th, 2018, 11:11 am
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Is that a Sailor Moon poster?!!!?
Eeveeisthebest
March 19th, 2018, 11:39 am
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Yo I know everyone's said this already but I can see my babies T_T
ZSoj
March 19th, 2018, 5:17 pm
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With a booooooy
Olivestoday
March 19th, 2018, 5:58 pm
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Does hele mai mean “come here”?
Mccull61
March 21st, 2018, 12:06 am
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Cute story!!! When I look for new comics to read and follow often times I'm looking for stories with really bright colors. :) maybe because I find it more interesting than just black and white, or maybe because I just have a thing for it in my own works. But either way your colors caught my eye first, and second it was your cute boys. ♡ they're sweet and I like Alex a lot already. He seems childish and eager to please, but also confident and street smart. Nice compliments to the nerd, Stephen~

I'm nor sure I'd you're looking for any critique in your works, but if there was any advice I could give to a new story like this that has SO MUCH POTENTIAL (seriously you do!) It would be to be weary of your pacing :) updating a page once a week can make you feel like more story-line has actually gone by than what the readers have seen, and if you're WAITING for updates it might not seem like a big deal. But when you read a comic start-to-(wherever it might end at the moment) the pacing might start to feel accelerated. I sort of got a little bit of that feeling with this comic.

So my two cents is just, relax, take your time ;) don't rush to the good stuff! Your fans may be eager and pulling for it, but in the long run what will continue to get you more and more new readers is a story with a natural, genuine flow. And of course, a little suspense ;)

AND if you're not looking for any feedback than I apologize. I don't take time to stop and comment very often but like I said, this comic has a good amount of potential and I'm gonna follow along! :)

thanks for creating!!!
KaseyCass
March 26th, 2018, 10:54 pm
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@Mccull61: Eyy you're here xD